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I live in upstate New York. I have been writing for over 25 years, although I have lost most of what I had written before 1990. The poems on this blog are all originals. Those listed as (Undated pre-1993) were written while I was in college studying English/Elementary Education. After, I attended law school and became an attorney. I wrote regularly until 1997, thereafter unintentionally taking an 11 year hiatus. I started writing again in February 2008.
Some random thoughts on my writing.
My poems tend to be conversationalist, as if I am making an observation about something and communicating it through conversation. I have been accused of undisciplined, stream of conciousness verse – which has some validity, as they often start that way, but not completely, as they really areĀ edited and labored over.
In general I am a fan of iambic verse, but I will as readily break it for effect as use it for effect. I also am a fan of punctuation (and capitalization) in poetry (sorry ee cummings), but I understand that those are devices to an end and I will discard them at times as well. My poems also tend to be very introspective, even when writing about someone or something else. I subscribe heavily to the school of “Every artist is a canibal, every poet is a thief” in that I borrow imagery from everywhere and will reinvent it and throw it in there – often recognizable, but not in an expected way, but I am as likely to borrow from Classical Literature and reference as I am from modern day pop culture.
My style is fairly constant at this point, although I do experiment at times – sometimes to better effect than others, but for the most part it becomes quite recognizable. I tend to write very sensually – as in the “senses” taste, touch, sight, etc. I also use a device that just kind of happend that I don’t see much of elsewhere that I describe as call and response – where I will repeat words, phrases, images, etc, in the same poem, from poem to poem. I mine my own writing very heavily and will use a similar phrasing from time to time. It kind of stresses the thematic element or the word or the idea.
Thanks for reading!
(c) 2009 Dakin Lecakes

a prolific writer indeed
my interest is piqued, i’ll be back.
I like your blog–will add you to my blogroll!
Analytical — which I mean as a compliment, for I sincerely admire the virtue (I call it a virtue, haha) of self-restraint in writers. Always a plus to be self-aware, i.e. of one’s writing process (be it expected or eccentric). Now, off I go to read your poems. Cheers.
Oh you haven’t changed at all! So glad to see you in the blog world! I have just the thing for you…collaboration. Ever tried it?
Hey Jill – thanks for reading – so good to hear from you again – your blog is great. Would love to collaborate sometime!
I am enjoying the read. Thanks fella.
The repetition of phrases or near repetition of phrases and forms goes back at least to medevil poetry. You are in good company.
Nice stuff–I’m a big fan of more strongly metrical poetry than is the norm today, and your iambs flow nicely. You’re striking a good balance between metrical strength and conversational flow, which is something I aim for in my own work.
Just thought I’d drop a line and say how much I enjoy your poetry.
Dakin, Your poem SOMETHING GOOD reminded me of a poem that my son wrote when he was about 13 years old…here it is…see what I mean? :
The Pond (this is copyrighted)
Past the far mountains, the serene
surroundings of the pond endure pleasure and
pain. The light and the dar, the two sides
of the coin. The pleasure giving off such
light that all you can do is smile when you
see it come through the window and see the
soft rays touch your collection of teddy
bears. The pain giving off such darkness that it consumes all
of which has fear.
It makes
you tremble as if you had just seen your
house burn down. The light travels throughout
the twilight and settles upon a dying tree. A
solarity tree that smiles from its encounter
with both the pain and the pleasure and
welcomes them both.
Your site was trackbacked to me… thank you WordPress!
Barry